Her love was rarely said
Tender hearts are buried deep
Strong love propelled each step she tread.
.
A quiet way that some misread,
A lonely path is always steep
Her love was rarely said.
.
Homemade loaves of wholegrain bread
and chores of dreary household keep
Strong love propelled each step she tread.
.
Many books at night she read,
her children tucked and fast asleep
Her love was rarely said.
.
A winter widow, her brood had fled
She volunteered her time to weep
Strong love propelled each step she tread.
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This tired earth she no longer treads
but of her gifts I still do reap
Her love was rarely said—
strong love propelled each step she tread.
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So bittersweet, and wistful. I like how the line, “strong love propelled each step she tread” becomes the repeated tread.
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Thanks Merril. Tread had a lucky landing 🙂 It’s my first Villanelle…not easy (for me anyway) but absorbing.
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This is beautiful, Janice.
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Thank you 🙂
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Excellent!
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Thank you 🙂
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It is so beautifully written. I loved the imagery through your words.
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Thank you :))
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So much depth, the further the reader becomes immersed in the poem, lovely art Janice.
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Thank you Denis 🙂
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You wrote a beautiful tribute in a challenging form!
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful and touching poem, Janice. This brought memories of my grandma who’s ‘strong love propelled each step she tread.’ ❤ xx
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Thank you Vashti 🙂
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Love this Janice, really poignant and thoughtful. 🙂
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Thank you Marje.
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