broken sunflower
torn apart by a rainstorm —
puddles on the path
© Chèvrefeuille
sparkling refractions of light
food, water, on table set
(my response)
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broken sunflower
torn apart by a rainstorm —
puddles on the path
© Chèvrefeuille
sparkling refractions of light
food, water, on table set
(my response)
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grass on river bank
bending over in warm breeze
pale moon looking down
© Ken Gierke (RivrVlogr)
glimpsing all that slips away
never ending ebb and flow (my response)
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Episode #18 of Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenges for September 2018 features a haiku recently written by Ken Gierke, a poet who posts on WordPress (link above).
plum-coloured asters
final flourish of summer
clusters of rapture
©️2018 Ontheland
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broken by the storm
the asters’ fragrance rises
out of damp earth
©️Jane Reichhold (1937-2016)
memories in wildflowers
sun-kissed pebbles by the sea
(my response)
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Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga challenge #15 inspired me to write about the wild asters behind my garden and to provide a Tan Renga response to Jane Reichhold’s haiku that I intend to be a small tribute to her as a haiku poet and teacher.
between dusty cars
an orange butterfly flits
the traffic rumbles
©️2018 Kim M. Russell
losing time in a standstill
dreaming of wings shifting fate
(my response)
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In this Carpe Diem Tan Renga episode the featured haiku is a contemporary one written by Kim Russell of Writing in North Norfolk (see link above). I was thrilled just a couple of days ago—when sitting on a four-lane highway in a traffic jam a Monarch butterfly brushed against my window. I immediately thought of Kim’s haiku.
sunlight unfurls
on this scarred landscape
cradling new life
©️Ontheland
pear tree in full bloom on a battlefield
collapsed house becomes beautiful again
© Masaoka Shiki (re-worked by Chèvrefeuille)
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This is a second Carpe Diem Tan Renga challenge with a twist, in which we write a haiku to precede the lines of a featured poet, who in this case is Masaoka Shiki (1867-1902).
grasses wilt:
the braking locomotive
grinds to a halt.
©️ Yamaguchi Seishi (1901-1994), Tr. Michael R. Burch
billows of steam scorch the sky
sea gulls screech in sharp dissent
(my response)
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One apple, alone
in the abandoned orchard
reddens for winter
Ⓒ Patrick Blanche (Tr. Michael R. Burch)
its tired stem grips tight
devoted to ripe perfection (my response)
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This Carpe Diem Tan Renga challenge features a haiku by French poet, Patrick Blanche.
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on a clover path
in the gentle hum of bees
village sounds are near (my hokku)
the temple bell stops but I still hear
the sound coming out of the flowers
(final two lines from Basho—see below)
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For this Carpe Diem Tan Renga challenge Chevrefeuille offers a twist. Instead of asking for a response to a featured haiku, he has provided the final two lines for which we are to write a haiku (hokku) to precede it. Basho’s words are taken from his haibun ‘Narrow Road into the Deep North’.
The featured haiku for Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #4 was written by Hamish Managua Gunn.
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midwinternight
a dark sky’s lights dance
in the wolf’s eyes (Hamish Managua Gunn)
pups tumbling in sparkling snow
the pack’s treasures, her delight (my response)
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Carpe Diem’s third September Tan Renga challenge commences with a haiku written by Chèvrefeuille in 2015.
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a soothing breeze
cicadas sing their song
sound of water (Chèvrefeuille)
in this cathedral of nature
my restless heart finds peace (my response)
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©️2018 Ontheland