Horizons splashed with
rich orange brilliant red
yellow maple boughs
hushing post-summer mourning—
until winter strips all branches bare
©2016 Ontheland
Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is featuring a month long Tanka event with daily prompts. This is my response to Tanka Splendor #1.
Lovely seasonal poem… wonderful descriptive colours of autumn!
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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I really like this one, Janice. There’s a wild, natural feel to it, if that makes sense. 🙂
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Thanks–wild and natural makes much sense :))
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🙂
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Powerful poetry for Autumn Janice.
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Thank you Denis 🙂
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I love the use of colour in this tanka, Janice!
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Such natural exquisiteness.
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Some autumn sights are exquisite 🙂
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