ran the race,
passed tests, and
as many times before,
earned the certificate of completion.
Yet something was missing.
happiness—
self discoveries
on fresh path
each dawn, shift of light
bird song changes key
~ ~ ~
Reading Suzanne’s Ontheroad Prompt: The Haijun on the Road led me to these thoughts….a haibun of sorts, having a brief intro and a closing tanka…
© 2017 Ontheland
Lovely, Janice!
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Thank you 🙂
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Now that I like 🙂 It’s exactly how I feel this morning. Thanks very much linking to On the Road. The idea of writing haibun in new and creative ways appeals to me. I’ve been thinking about similar approaches.
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You have certainly captured a road to continue on in the poem Janice.
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Another Stupendous creation! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Thank you Dorna 🙂
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