Renga with Basho #5

Wren, courtesy of Pixabay.com

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In this Renga with three haiku of Matsuo Basho, translated by Jane Reichhold, the three line stanzas in bold italics are written by Basho and the regular typeface responses are mine.

what kind of tree

with the unknown flower

such a fragrance

.

is that a brown-headed crow

snapping air for flying fare?

.

with a fan

drinking wine in the shadow

of scattered blossoms

.

wren on the pedestal bath

sipping flower-flavoured tea

.

melting away

the brush draws up the water

of a spring

.

swift strokes over rice paper

unveiling a waterfall

.

blossoms at their peak

the mountain the same as always

at daybreak

.

floral scents infuse the dawn

bird songs trill to greet the day

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Carpe Diem Renga with Basho #5