beyond – – haiku

beyond the fence . . .

the draw

of a wildflower path

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2 thoughts on “beyond – – haiku

  1. “the draw” – perfect placement and word choice! The whole haiku hinges and opens here for me. Also love the subtle implication of authorship of one’s life (as in an artist drawing), not just the pull of the wild.

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