empty porch – – haiku Posted on October 16, 2020October 16, 2020Categories Poetry empty porch summer’s paraphernalia put away . . ©️2020 Ontheland Share this:PrintEmailTweetMoreLike this:Like Loading...
I think it’s the first line–one leaps to all sorts of conclusions about why it’s empty, even though you go on to explain it’s because summer is over. Still, it sounded final–and bleak to me. Evocative though! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thanks Merril … the porch and deck do feel bleak right now with almost everything put away. LikeLiked by 1 person
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There is something very final about this poem’s message
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Until next year . . .
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I think it’s the first line–one leaps to all sorts of conclusions about why it’s empty, even though you go on to explain it’s because summer is over. Still, it sounded final–and bleak to me. Evocative though!
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Thanks Merril … the porch and deck do feel bleak right now with almost everything put away.
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You just reminded me that I need to do that… 🙂
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There’s so much to do in fall and spring before it gets too cold or too hot!
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