empty porch – – haiku

empty porch

summer’s paraphernalia

put away

.

.

©️2020 Ontheland

6 thoughts on “empty porch – – haiku

    1. I think it’s the first line–one leaps to all sorts of conclusions about why it’s empty, even though you go on to explain it’s because summer is over. Still, it sounded final–and bleak to me. Evocative though!

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