gibbous moon
a funnel of ash leaves
floats upward
in the silver night
a moment of sky
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©️2020 Ontheland
Haikai Challenge #158 – – harvest moon
(written a few nights before the October 1 harvest moon)
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (10/1/20): Janice’s latest #tanka for my current @Haikai Challenge!
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Thanks for sharing! Don’t forget to add your link to Mister Linky! 😉
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Thanks Frank…all linked up 🙂
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Lovely imagery, especially that “funnel” of leaves.
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Thank you … it was an awesome moment 🙂
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‘a moment of sky’ love that image.
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Thank you, Jane :))
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Love that last line too😊
Pat
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Love that last line too😊
Pat
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Thank you, Pat 🙂
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The leaves play, day or night. Great visual in your poem of leaves dancing in moonlight.
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Thanks Lisa 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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Beautiful, I love that image of the leaves rising into the silver night.
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Thanks … on of those moments that captivates 🙂
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