white dew – – tanka Posted on September 22, 2020September 22, 2020Categories Poetry white dew in morning hush a stem falls how damp the wind as days fade to night . . ©️2020 Ontheland Haikai Challenge #157 – – autumn equinox Share this:PrintEmailTweetMoreLike this:Like Loading...
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented: #Haiku Happenings #9: Janice’s latest #tanka for my current #Haikai Challenge! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
I love the “white dew” and last two lines really pull the reader (aka me 🙂 ) in LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thank you, Lisa! We’ve had less white dew lately because of the warmer weather but there will be more to enjoy.🌻🍁 LikeLike Reply
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #9: Janice’s latest #tanka for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Thank you, Frank 🙂
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I really like how you infer the Autumn Equinox.
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Thank you 🙂
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I love the “white dew” and last two lines really pull the reader (aka me 🙂 ) in
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Thank you, Lisa! We’ve had less white dew lately because of the warmer weather but there will be more to enjoy.🌻🍁
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Beautiful Janice😊
Pat
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Thank you :))
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