snowflakes – – haiku

snowflakes

dropping faster now

only the bird feeder

swings sideways…spun

by an invisible hand

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6 thoughts on “snowflakes – – haiku”

Annika Perry says:

February 2, 2020 at 11:22 am

It can be quite eerie to see the bird feeder swinging thus … and then come crashing to the ground!

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1. Janice says:
  
  February 2, 2020 at 4:16 pm
  
  Such a feeder crash would be eerie! I kept peering to see if there was a chipmunk or even a tiny bird on board…but saw nothing.
  
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Frank J. Tassone says:

February 2, 2020 at 11:34 am

Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: Janice’s latest #tanka!

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1. Janice says:
  
  February 2, 2020 at 4:17 pm
  
  Thank you, Frank 🙂
  
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  1. Frank J. Tassone says:
    
    February 3, 2020 at 9:01 pm
    
    🙂
    
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Denis1950 says:

February 3, 2020 at 1:57 am

A very meditative haiku Janice. I would love to see some snow out my window.

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