meltdown – – haiku

another meltdown

a stream of water pouring

from the eaves

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5 thoughts on “meltdown – – haiku”

Frank J. Tassone says:

January 24, 2020 at 9:35 am

Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (1/24/20): Janice’s latest haiku!

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1. Janice says:
  
  January 24, 2020 at 10:35 am
  
  Thank you, Frank 🙂
  
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  1. Frank J. Tassone says:
    
    January 24, 2020 at 10:36 am
    
    😇
    
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Denis1950 says:

January 30, 2020 at 1:59 am

Could be taken either way, natural or human outpouring. Wonderful imagery Janice.

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1. Janice says:
  
  January 31, 2020 at 9:49 am
  
  Fully intended 🙂 Thank you, Denis.
  
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