winter grey – – senryu Posted on January 4, 2020January 20, 2020Categories Poetry winter grey facing emptiness with oven fries . . ©️2020 Ontheland Share this:PrintEmailTweetMoreLike this:Like Loading...
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented: #Haiku Happenings #5: Janice’s latest #photo haiku! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Do I detect a touch of metaphor in those fried frozen grasses/reeds? Wonderful senryu and a lovely image Janice LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
It’s funny…I didn’t intend the frozen grasses to stand for fries but I noticed the possible interpretation yesterday. The photo happened to be the best current example of cold grey that I had on hand. Thanks Denis 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #5: Janice’s latest #photo haiku!
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Thank you, Frank 🙂
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Do I detect a touch of metaphor in those fried frozen grasses/reeds?
Wonderful senryu and a lovely image Janice
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It’s funny…I didn’t intend the frozen grasses to stand for fries but I noticed the possible interpretation yesterday. The photo happened to be the best current example of cold grey that I had on hand. Thanks Denis 🙂
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