traffic – – haiku

traffic train

the pushy speeder

lags behind



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2 thoughts on “traffic – – haiku

    1. Thank you Denis. For me the strongest aspect of this was the traffic train…a sensation of being in motion as part of something larger than my vehicle consisting of a line of cars held together as one unit.


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