roadside chicory
languid in torpor
from the haze
my gaze flits
to the violet edge
.
.
©️2019 Ontheland
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roadside chicory
languid in torpor
from the haze
my gaze flits
to the violet edge
.
.
©️2019 Ontheland
Ontheland 
Oh I love this soo much. So much description, so much meat in this. So beautiful, every line 💟🐦
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Thank you 🙂 🦋
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You are welcome! 🌞
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The last two lines- I love the image of this beyond the literal meaning. Where is that edge and how did I come to be there? What will I do next?
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Thank you…I like the possibilities beyond the basic experience too…the violet of chicory (the colour seems richer these days) has been on my mind lately…and edges, peripheries of awareness hold much potential.
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There is so much depth in this tanka, your creativity comes out superbly Janice.
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Thank you, Denis 🙂
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