waiting – – haiku

waiting for rain –

the sweat it takes to water

my harvest dreams



©️2019 Ontheland

3 thoughts on “waiting – – haiku

  1. I love this poem. I like the comparison of rain and sweat, in that the weather has to do some work and it sweats – plus it evokes the sweat you as the grower put into the plants as well. Just perfect.

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    1. Thank you, Claudia…those connections between sweat, tap water and rain are definitely there for me. The heat squeezes the sweat out of me and eventually out of the atmosphere ( hopefully tonight :))

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