deep summer – – tanka Posted on July 4, 2019July 4, 2019Categories Poetry deep summer . . flowers drying as fresh ones open my pace slowing to July’s sultry pulse . . ©️2019 Ontheland Share this:PrintEmailTweetMoreLike this:Like Loading...
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented: #Haiku Happenings #6: Janice’s latest #tanka! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Here it is just the first batches that are drying. There are still more buds swelling…a slow surge of growth. LikeLike Reply
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #6: Janice’s latest #tanka!
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Thank you, Frank 🙂
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Love this so much!
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I’m happy you like it 🙂
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I like the first three lines just by themselves. 🙂
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The drying flowers just about sums it up. Everything is slowing down.
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Here it is just the first batches that are drying. There are still more buds swelling…a slow surge of growth.
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It’s more like the survivors picking their way out of the rubble here.
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