thin ice – – senryu

A few takes on ‘thin ice’ for Frank Tassone’s Haikai Challenge:

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.

detecting thin ice

I hold

my response

.

.

thin ice ahead

the strain

in her smile

.

.

morning frost

in his voice

thin ice

.

.

thin ice

a satisfying crackle

under my boots

.

.

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