A few takes on ‘thin ice’ for Frank Tassone’s Haikai Challenge:
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detecting thin ice
I hold
my response
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thin ice ahead
the strain
in her smile
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morning frost
in his voice
thin ice
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thin ice
a satisfying crackle
under my boots
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: Janice’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thank you, Frank 🙂
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My pleasure, Janice! 🙂
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Emotional thin ice…
Apropos. So much pressure in life. And yet to find some humor – a nice crunch under one’s boot.
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I have always loved that crunch and crackle 🙂
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Yeah, i like the feel of that last one too.😊
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morning frost in his voice thin ice
Well done, Janice!!!
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Thank you, Lindy 🙂
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