shuffling: haiku

shuffling on frozen snow

to fetch the mail

a polar expedition

©️2019 Ontheland

7 thoughts on “shuffling: haiku”

Jennifer G. Knoblock says:

February 8, 2019 at 12:04 pm

Perfectly captured. My driveway is mostly clear, but there’s this mound of icy slush right by the mailbox. Ugh.

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1. Janice says:
  
  February 8, 2019 at 2:19 pm
  
  Thanks Jennifer. Today the driveway is pure gray ice even more slippery than frozen snow…it’s different every day.
  
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Hélène - Willow Poetry says:

February 8, 2019 at 12:44 pm

I can visualize it all. Perfect haiku Janice.

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1. Janice says:
  
  February 8, 2019 at 2:19 pm
  
  Thank you, Helene 🙂
  
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  1. Hélène - Willow Poetry says:
    
    February 8, 2019 at 7:50 pm
    
    My pleasure.
    
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Margreeth says:

February 8, 2019 at 2:55 pm

I think it’s hilarious. Sorry, but it’s so funny it hurts!! It describes the feeling exactly.

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1. Janice says:
  
  February 8, 2019 at 4:05 pm
  
  Thank you. Happy it made you laugh 🙂
  
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