winter storm –
a train without a whistle
blows past the house
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.
storm on the prowl –
snow prints
tread window glass
.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #4: Janice’s latest haiku!
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Thank you, Frank 🙂
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My pleasure 😇
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That sounds like a big wind!
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It was a very powerful wind indeed 🙂
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Oh such Thrilling-Chilling scenes. 🥀😎
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Whoa I don’t think I wanna experience that kinda wind
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A small but potent pleasure. Nicely done!
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Thank you 🙂
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It seems quite huge and chilling
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Yes. X
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I can totally relate
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Its really good
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Thank you 🙂
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This haiku was good❤️ check my blogs I’m sure you’ll like it 😄
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These are beautiful.
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Thank you
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Strong words.
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OMG what a wind. There was not a lot of damages
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No damage 🙂 The train effect was from both the roar of wind and the visual effect of a wide band of snow blowing by the house.
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Beautiful!
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lol its strong winter…
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Relatable☺
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Well written
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Thank you
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Very compelling and very powerful read!
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Thank you 🙂
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I wish I could follow you, but I’m new at this and I can’t find the button. Congrats on your pieces!
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I felt the cold and wind as I read it! Powerful.
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Thank you 🙂
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Nice
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Great haiku!
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Thought-provoking!
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Beautiful picture
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Thank you 🙂
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Love what you have done with with picture…
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I feel the cold as I was reading your article..very nice
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Love how simple yet vividly winter is described here!
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Thank you 🙂
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Love
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Sound great..?😇
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nice
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Love! Very vivid. Reminds me of Jackson Hole, Wy
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That’s a nice haiku
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May you always be safe
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Yeah man…gotta git out in that foul weather…
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Always wanted to learn to write proper haikus. This was beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh dear winter! Please go away.
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It’s taking its time 🙂
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simple and good. thank you for sharing them.
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Thank you 🙂
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Love a good haiku 👏
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Thank you 🙂
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Yes! Love this. Also the photo 🙂
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Great imagez
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Enjoyed this
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