Early autumn is gone,
dried leaves scattered,
marigolds dead from frost,
yet, Sun sparkles ochre colours,
pulses from behind grey clouds,
at night, waxing Moon lingers low,
two matches striking,
begging sparks of happiness
from cold bones who mourn
that what has been departs.
~
©️2018 Ontheland
A quadrille (a 44-word poem) for dVerse Poets Pub using the word ‘early’.
Here at least, the autumn colored leaves are still hanging on. Love this line: Sun sparkles ochre colours.
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Thank you, Grace. There are leaves on trees in larger groupings but the one in my back yard was done in by recent days of wind and rain.
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Ahh, the changing of seasons as the changing of life and rekindled memories. Very nice.
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Thank you 🙂
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Your description is so vibrant, alive.
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Thank you 🙂
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The last 3 lines speaks to me. Nicely done.
Pat R
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Thank you, Pat.
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We had first frost last night. Finally the leaves will start turning. The last three lines are truly lovely.
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Thank you, Toni.
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Janice, I’m watching just such a sun and its ochre colours behind the grey misty clouds this morning… you capture this later autumn beautifully and vividly. The moon the last nights have been stunning, despite the cold I’ve been out to view it, hypnotised!
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Thank you Annika. I saw the almost full moon two nights ago and hope the clouds will part for the full Hunters Moon tonight.
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Janice, I wasn’t aware of Hunters Moon until you mentioned it, and then a few hours I looked ‘down’ at it from the skies as I flew home to the U.K. It was extraordinary and I felt I’d entered another dimension! Hope you had a good viewing of it and the clouds kept away. 🌑
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Seeing the moon from a plane must have been amazing! Tonight is dark yet again unfortunately. I’ll keep checking for the next few days.
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Your quadrille glow, Janice! I love the contrast between the dead leaves and marigolds and the sun sparkling ochre from behind grey clouds. The final lines offer some hope for ‘sparks of happiness from cold bones’.
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That should say ‘Your quadrille glows’ – apologies1
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No problem…I find the text editor has a mind of its own.
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Thank you, Kim 🙂
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autumn divided into early and late – such contrasts – surreal for someone like me who lives in Asia – but gives me new perspective
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One of the joys of blogging….tuning into different seasonal patterns… 🙂 One of my struggles has been getting used to reading about buds of spring a bit farther south in the States when the ground is still frozen here in southern Canada.
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ah yes my friend in Calgary mentioned snow last week – what a lovely world we live in! and here on the equator thunderstorms alternate with intense heat.
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Such beautiful, vivid and lively descrptions in this 😍 absolutely love it! ❤
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Thank you, Sanaa.
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lovely poem…love this line, “begging sparks of happiness from cold bones who mourn”…
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Thank you, Dorianna.
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Nice line: “yet, Sun sparkles ochre colours”
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Thank you, Frank.
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For me the matches reminds me that it’s soon all hallows when we light candles at graves.
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Such Superb scenes! 😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna.
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It’s still autumn here and even dry, which one can’t always say in October in the Pacific Northwest. But the rain is coming, and I have no doubt frost is to follow.
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I love, cold bones that mourn. Great poem, Janice!
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Thank you, Sara.
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A lovely quadrille.I can relate to the two parts of Autumn. The skies are now looking ominous for Winter.
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Thank you, Mish. Yes, much cloud cover lately… hoping the clouds hold more rain than snow…at least for a while longer…
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May I reblog? So spot on – I love it.
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Yes you may reblog it. I am so happy you enjoy the poem. Thank you 🙂
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