grass on river bank
bending over in warm breeze
pale moon looking down
© Ken Gierke (RivrVlogr)
glimpsing all that slips away
never ending ebb and flow (my response)
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Episode #18 of Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenges for September 2018 features a haiku recently written by Ken Gierke, a poet who posts on WordPress (link above).
Janice, both your response and the poem first are beautiful. A soft feeling ” bending over in soft breeze”
answered by your ” never ending ebb and flow” .
miriam
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Thank you, Miriam.
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You’ve woven time through this marvelously, Janice.
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Thank you, Ken. I enjoyed contemplating your haiku.
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😀
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We do only glimpse it, don’t we? (K)
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For sure…perception is often hazy at best.
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Again, such Fabulous scenes! 😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna.
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