September Tan Renga (7)

Posted on Categories Poetry

grasses wilt:

the braking locomotive

grinds to a halt.

©️ Yamaguchi Seishi (1901-1994), Tr. Michael R. Burch

billows of steam scorch the sky

sea gulls screech in sharp dissent

(my response)

~

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge September 2018 (7)

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Published by Janice

My name is Janice.  I started blogging as Ontheland when I moved from Toronto to a rural area near Kingston, Ontario in Canada.  Over time I have found myself writing poetry, mostly in Japanese forms, such as haiku and haibun.  One of my deepest interests is the natural world: the joy of it and how we can look after it better.

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