September is Tan Renga month at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. The first haiku we engage with is by Jane Reichhold.
:
morning sun
the twinkle of stars
still in the dew (Jane Reichhold)
elixir of a cool night
anointing the brow of day (my response)
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oh wow, that is so subtle, it’s sublime and perfect ….
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Thank you, Pat
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Excellent 2nd stanza.
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Thank you 🙂
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Simply, Superb-ness! 😎🥀
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Thank you 🙂
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Nice play on words, Janice.
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Thank you, Ken.
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‘anointing the brow of day…’
Just lovely.
I am not usually an early riser.. but I did get to see the fingernail moon starting to set at 6:30 am.
You also made me think of an arched brow in surprise 🙂
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Thanks Jules. ‘Fingernail moon’ is a nice description…
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