Tan Renga: morning sun

September is Tan Renga month at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. The first haiku we engage with is by Jane Reichhold.


morning sun

the twinkle of stars

still in the dew (Jane Reichhold)

elixir of a cool night

anointing the brow of day (my response)


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10 thoughts on “Tan Renga: morning sun

  1. ‘anointing the brow of day…’
    Just lovely.
    I am not usually an early riser.. but I did get to see the fingernail moon starting to set at 6:30 am.

    You also made me think of an arched brow in surprise 🙂

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