Tan Renga: morning sun

September is Tan Renga month at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. The first haiku we engage with is by Jane Reichhold.

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morning sun

the twinkle of stars

still in the dew (Jane Reichhold)

elixir of a cool night

anointing the brow of day (my response)

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10 thoughts on “Tan Renga: morning sun

  1. ‘anointing the brow of day…’
    Just lovely.
    I am not usually an early riser.. but I did get to see the fingernail moon starting to set at 6:30 am.

    You also made me think of an arched brow in surprise 🙂

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