heat touching my neck
saying spring has departed
June sun rules the sky
~
once fragile and new
now boisterous and green
long summer days
~
©️2018 Ontheland
Inspired by today, June 21, summer solstice and by Haikai Challenge #38. You might want to follow the challenge link to find more summer solstice poems in Japanese form.
Happy Midsummer, Janice! 😀🌺 A lovely poem with great contrast between the Spring and Summer –
‘once fragile and new
now boisterous and green’
That sums it up perfectly!
A special day today … I just don’t want to think of the days already growing shorter. Summer must be savoured first!
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Thank you Annika. Yes let’s just savour the peak and ignore it’s fading as long as we can 😉
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #5: Janice’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thank you for the Haikai challenge Frank.
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Your poem brings rays of summer warmth into my winter morning.
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Glad to share the warmth 🙂 I guess you get rain and chill at this time of year?
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Sure do. Raining and 13 C today!
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Very nice Janice! … and it won’t be long until dry leaves begin to fall!
Dwight
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Hey now!
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Ah, such Superb-ness. 😎🥀
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Thank you 🙂
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