gazing from the shore
my feelings of want dissolve
with the dying light
©️2018 Ontheland
~
This haiku is inspired by two haiku of Ozaki Hosai (1885-1926) who was part of the free haiku movement in Japan:
on the field
where evening has died out,
my footsteps
~
the heart
that seeks something
I release to the sea
© Ozaki Hosai (revised by Chèvrefeuille)
In response to Carpe Diem Crossroads #9: Ozaki Hosai’s ‘on the field’
Oh, that is lovely, Janice!
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Thank you, Kim 🙂
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Excellent contribution. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thank you 🙂
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This is very beautiful. It fills me with a feeling of peace.
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Thank you Suzanne.
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