one note of the shakuhachi
resounds endlessly
piercing the winter clouds
© Soen Nakagawa (1907-1984)
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the flute’s haunting tones
scatter winter clouds
echoes beyond time
©️2018 Ontheland
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disappearing
snow on mountain peak
unfurls a Rainbow
© Soen Nakagawa
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mountain snowmelt
in halos of mist
shimmering rainbows
©️2018 Ontheland
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In response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #30 Revise that Haiku: Soen Nakagawa
Really beautiful Janice, as if sound and light shimmer together.
miriam
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Thank you, Miriam 🙂
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simply wonderful
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Thank you :))
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I tried “plaintive tones,” but thought it was too specific and they’re not all sad.
I like your line, “the flute’s haunting tones”
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Thank you Ken.
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Your poems echo the spirit of Nakagawa beautifully.
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Thank you Suzanne 🙂
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These are beautiful, Janice 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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🙂
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Brava. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Thank you 🙂
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