Fusion haiku with Sōgi

the lake’s clear waters

silence as fresh as spring sky

first speed boat rumbles

~

©️2018 Ontheland

My haiku is inspired by contemplation of these two haiku by classical poet, Sōgi (1421-1502):

ah, for coolness,

it rivals the water’s depth –

this autumn sky

©Sōgi

abandoned house

the garden taken over –

butterfly home

© Sōgi (Tr. Chèvrefeuille)

Carpe Diem Crossroads #7 Sōgi

8 thoughts on “Fusion haiku with Sōgi

  1. I lived near a lake growing up and one of my early memories is the sound of a boat motor, early in the morning, in the otherwise silent early sunshine – I always envisioned it as a streak across a plain surface. This poem brought it back to me.

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