My mother
was not one for symbols
poetry, flowers, song
Life was survival
drawing within the lines
propriety
avoiding illness, death, disgrace
She loved in a quiet way
I love you, not said
was to be understood
shown in service
in food prepared
in time given
in a kiss goodnight…
She offered her token
with shyness
surprised to discover
it would be treasured
(did I not show my love?)
an ornate but simple pin
of her mother’s mother, Catherine
C Mc K,
entwined initials
of a mother who died young,
a connection in my hands to
to touch
to wander with
into invisible realms.
~
Inspired by dVerse Tuesday Poetics: Threads of Feeling
Love this… but a simple thing is to became part of him… your past becomes intertwined
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I found this very moving. I love the link between the generations, and your description of your mother’s quiet, but powerful love. It’s a lovely poem.
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Thank you Sarah.
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expresses so well the continuance of love
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Janice, this is a beautiful poem describing your mother’s love for you
and your dawning understanding of her way of singing a love song.
Then this precious pin that connects her with you ….along with memories
forever there.
Miriam
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Yes “her way”. Thank you Miriam 🙂
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I like this because of its humanity. There is no necessity to be forever saying—I love you. It’s something that has to be shown, not mouthed. That slinging around of ‘love you’s makes me curl up, to be honest. It’s often completely vacuous. Your mother had it right. Lovely poem, Janice.
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Thank you Jane 🙂
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🙂
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The simple gestures are sometimes the deepest. (K)
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The things not said in words, and the connections of generations comes through here. Lovely poem, Janice.
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Thank you Merril.
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Beautifully written, held close to the heart!
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Thank you 🙂
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well done.
🙂
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A simple pin with enormous value. She sounds lime an amazing woman who knew all the real values. Beautiful poem.
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Thank you!
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A powerful, poignant remembrance of your mum.
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Thank you.
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My pleasure!
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That pin is a precious token and heirloom ~ Your mother’s love is genuinely moving – sometimes actions speak louder than words.
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Fabulous tribute.. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thank you!
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I like these lines emphasizing the doubt the giver has that tokens of love might even be accepted: “She offered her token
with shyness
surprised to discover
it would be treasured”
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Thank you Frank!
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I love you is very hard to say for many people! A beautiful piece.
dwight
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Thank you! Yes those three words are so difficult for some and so easy for others.
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Lovely! C Mc K, entwined initials. Ornate but simple is always good in my book!
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