in grey winter chill
small creatures run for cover
hawk wings slice the sky
~
©️2018 Ontheland
In response to Frank J. Tassone’s Haikai Challenge #17: hawk
in grey winter chill
small creatures run for cover
hawk wings slice the sky
~
©️2018 Ontheland
In response to Frank J. Tassone’s Haikai Challenge #17: hawk
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #5: Janice’s latest haiku for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Thank you Frank!
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Su h Silent Beauty speaks Volumes! 😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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This is a pithy beautiful poem and I have seen it in action, I think.
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Thanks Claudia
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Love it – so concise! Do you know what bird it is in your header?
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Thanks Lindy…not sure whether or not the bird was drawn with a particular kind in mind or not…could be a symbolic bird or perhaps a dove…would be interested to know if it looks like a specific type to you
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I like the sharpness of this one, Janice.
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Thanks Jane
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🙂
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Sounds like things was about to get rough for the little ones. Graphic. I can see it. Nice!
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Yes, it does seem bird wing just slices through air.
I’ve some vultures here, bigger than the Coopers Hawk… amazing to watch them glide.
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