Can I write a poem
grazing on
hummus-dipped
breadsticks,
stirring dull residues
of wounds and tears
that clog my spirit?
I could bounce away
but then,
would I not still feel empty?
Perhaps I will stay,
sip cold coffee,
and move my pen.
~
A poem of exactly 44 words (a ‘quadrille’) for dVerse Poets Pub using the word ‘bounce’. Perhaps not a bouncy take on bounce, but more writing will get me bouncing again.
©2018 Ontheland
Oh you just did… bounce works well… and the bread sticks makes me hungry
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:))
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Nice poem. Well done!
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Thank you Cristian 🙂
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Ah, to write or not to write. That is the question! And a fine write it is, Janice!
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Thank you Frank 🙂
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YESSSSSS. Cold coffee and a pen sounds like a date to me! Love it. Always, always write. It is always the right answer. Love this, Janice.
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Thank you :))
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The coffee…no bounce without it.(K)
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Yes coffee is key 🙂
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Janice, this is a strong poem and beautiful.
Maybe if you make a nice hot mug of coffee and write until that residue
is cleared and leave the spirit bright and shiny,
And then you write some more…😊
miriam
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Thank you Miriam …. a good idea 🙂
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Fun how you brought food into your work.
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I often ease into writing with a snack 🙂
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Oh hangitall, have another bread stick and grab your pen. Better times are coming!
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:))
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I dont know which is more scrumptious.. bread sticks dipped in hummus or this poem!💖💖 Splendid write 😊
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Thanks Sanaa :)) …. the breadsticks were scrumptious…
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It is hard to write with a sense of emptiness, but moving the pen may help.
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Thanks Frank….I find just writing anything helps….
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I think you can and did write a poem, but now I have a craving for breadsticks.
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I’m sorry 😉
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I think hummus-dipped breadsticks should keep you sustained. Keep writing, Janice,and unclog your spirit, but try not to stir your coffee with your pen or a breadstick!
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Thank you Kim….excellent advice!
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This is probably my favorite poem of the day. Phenomenal. It just goes to show that the best poets can write about absolutely anything/everything, no matter where they are or what they’re feeling. Well done!
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Glad you liked it 🙂
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Another Scrumptious Morsel.. 😎🥀
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Thank you 🙂
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Well, there you go! You did it. It is possible you can write the blues away. It worked out well.
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Thanks Pat 🙂
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Always better to move that pen! Love this, but my coffee has to be piping hot!
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Coffee cools down quickly here 😉 thanks for your comment 🙂
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