raw winter winds
blanket
frozen ground
we the living celebrate
burn torches through dark nights
~
In response to Carpe Diem #1327. The title is a quote from the famous poem, “Do not go gentle into that good night” by Dylan Thomas (1914-1953).
©2017 Ontheland
Fantabulous! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Thank you Dorna 🙂
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I like this. A lot. Harsh and savage and elemental.
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Thanks Claudia…so happy to have a warm home to protect me from those elements!
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Yes, I feel that too. Winter is dangerous and to be respected, and shelter of a safe place is warming in more than one way.
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The sentiments you express appeal to me.
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Wow what a strong tanka … i can sense the rage.
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