thistles underfoot
spiked leaves of sharp minds
wise people buried here
herb foragers, healers
thorn plant whisperers
©2017 Ontheland
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This tanka is from musings that sometimes come up as I see thorn leaf rosettes and full grown thistles in the field around my house. It hints at and was inspired by Carpe Diem #1300–The Rose, another episode in Carpe Diem’s Rubaiyat, Another Way series. The featured quatrain from The Rubaiyat:
I sometimes think that never blows so red
The Rose as where some buried Caesar bled;
That every Hyacinth the Garden wears
Dropt in its Lap from some once lovely Head.
© Omar Khayyam (Tr. FitzGerald)
The thistle photo is from Pixabay.
I love these big thistles, I often find them only in meadows.
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The flowers are beautiful…the thorns are very harsh.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #7: Janice’s latest #tanka!
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Thank you Frank 🙂
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My pleasure 😇
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A beautiful tanka with a wonderful story.
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Thank you 🙂
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Superb! 😎😎😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Thanks Donna 🙂
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The poem takes the reader in many different directions Janice, very clever.
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Thanks Denis
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