How changed I am.
How do you see me now?
my ancient face,
pale sagging, worn
by wind and sun
by tides of tears
laden with joy and sorrow,
my life flows receded
as a tree surrenders a leaf
before it falls,
Do you superimpose
my face of years ago or
am I always there
in the wells of my eyes?
©2017 Ontheland
~
For Jane Dougherty’s “A Month with Yeats” day three. The inspiration quote is from Yeats’ poem, ‘The Magi’:
‘With all their ancient faces like rain-beaten stones’—W.B. Yeats
Wow! Janice, an incredible poem…powerful, thought-provoking and a wonderful response to the prompt, I’ve had to come back to it a few times.
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Thank you Annika…I am happy that it touched you.
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This is beautiful, Janice. I was thinking something similar today myself.
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Thank you Jane…the prompt helped me pull out some recent ‘stuff’
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I hope I don’t sound patronising (who am I anyway?) but it seems to me that your poetry is getting deeper and more imaged all the time. I enjoy reading your ‘stuff’.
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Thank you Jane I value your input very much🌹🌹
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And I yours 🙂
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😊
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Nicely done.
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Thank you 🙂
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Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Beautiful poem, Janice.
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Thank you 🙂
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