In Carpe Diem #1274 Chèvrefeuille invites us to explore ‘wordlessness’ in haiku. Visiting at a restaurant after it closed, I attempted some brief haiku:
chef sings
after hours
electric stars
~
hanging out
red scooter
decor
~
chairs cower
on tabletops
mop on the loose
~
work done
feet in the air
all tabled
~
©2017 Ontheland
Excellent series! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Thank you 🙂
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A wonderful series Janice, I especially love your ‘mop on the loose’! 😉💖 xxx
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Thank you…yes you have to watch out for those mops…one of our puppy friends finds them quite threatening.
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I love the last one, especially. The whole series reminded me of when I worked in the school cafeteria in college and how things were after dinner was finished and we had the place to ourselves as we cleaned up.
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Captured brilliantly Janice.
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Wow! These are all excellent, Janice. The third is my favorite; I could see it.
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Thank you Sara 🙂
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That 3rd one made me laugh. Funny☺☺☺☺
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That’s great 😊 thanks
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