may lift after cups of tea
the view is dense
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Hydro truck
watched through kitchen blinds
An inspection
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Yellow bird
lights up my window
her tail bounces
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My kitchen sink is under the window, allowing me to gaze out as I clean up. Suzanne’s post: ‘Flowers by the road’ reminded me this morning was eventful.
©2017 Ontheland
Another Remarkable round of Poetry! 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Thanks Dorna 🙂
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You really capture the immediacy of early morning in the average kitchen here. I enjoyed your haiku a great deal. They make me feel like I need another cup of tea before I venture out into the Saturday morning traffic. 🙂 Thanks for linking to On the Road.
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Thank you Suzanne.
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That comment might have come out wrong. I didn’t mean to imply that you or your kitchen are average. What I meant was your experience tallies with the experience of many of us looking out from our kitchen windows.
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Hi Suzanne. I read this second comment before the first one, as comments on my screen are ordered from most recent. No worries about either thought :))
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Three beautiful immediate haiku for your scene Janice
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Thank you Denis
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