Gravel country road
pre-teens on dirt bikes whiz by
old fellow in pickup truck
a thread of life’s web:
first joyous spins of the wheel
to end of driving permits.
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In this week’s episode of Writing and Enjoying Haiku (#6) Chèvrefeuille invites us to ‘think out of the box’…I ended up trying out a new (for me) form of Japanese poetry called a Sedoka.
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I like this sedoka …
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Thank you
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I like the riddle like words …a lifetime’s story about driving ….and what’s more , a reminder of “Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintenance ” !!!
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Always, Excellent!
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Thanks Dorna 🙂
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A wonderful experience for the Sedoka reader to stand still and imagine the passing of time.
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Thank you, Denis
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