wandering (2)

August 20, 2017 in Brockville by ontheland
I took the course

ran the race, 

passed tests, and

as many times before, 

earned the certificate of completion.

Yet something was missing.


      self discoveries

             on fresh path 

              each dawn, shift of light

              bird song changes key

                           ~  ~  ~

Reading Suzanne’s Ontheroad Prompt: The Haijun on the Road led me to these thoughts….a haibun of sorts, having a brief intro and a closing tanka…

© 2017 Ontheland

7 thoughts on “wandering (2)

  1. Now that I like 🙂 It’s exactly how I feel this morning. Thanks very much linking to On the Road. The idea of writing haibun in new and creative ways appeals to me. I’ve been thinking about similar approaches.

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