my head
in a halo of dappled
vines and fruit,
I think of Jack climbing
a magic beanstalk to the clouds
where a giant bellowed:
“Fee-fi-fo-fum !”
But up here,
there is nothing amiss
only a brief moment of verdant bliss.
~
It is Quadrille Monday at dVerse again and the word to be included in our 44-word poem is ‘bliss’. I use the word ‘fruits’ to refer to green beans as technically green beans are fruits and I feel the word conveys a sense of harvest and abundance. The photo below shows the beanstalk (bean vine climbing a bamboo pole) that inspired this poem and to the right, the black crate I stand on to reach the beans at the top. And as a bonus, the photo also shows a visit by my local wild turkey flock. Fortunately the beans were not disturbed as they are surrounded by netting (not visible in the photo.)
©2017 Ontheland
I love your green beans! this is a most excellent poem.
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beautiful interpretation
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Thank you Maureen 🙂
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A very imaginative ending to the lovely poem Janice.
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A beautiful green bliss Janice 💜🌿
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That’s a tall pole bean. It makes me want to grow some next year.
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They grow into a beautiful vine and provide delicious beans 🙂
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I would love to harvest some beans too… 🙂
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Nice language, well crafted!
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“…my head / in a halo of dappled / vines and fruit…”. Just a wonderful image to lead you into fairy tales. Well done!
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in a halo of dappled
vines and fruit…
Lovely!
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Your garden is lovely, such a blissful place to be in indeed. 🌸
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verdant bliss. that is beautiful.
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Thanks Rose.
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you’re welcome!
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Perfect moment of verdant bliss, Janice! My beans are done…
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I imagine yours started earlier as you are farther south. Mine are winding down as I guess they always do 🙂
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Excellent! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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You are lucky to have that verdant bliss ~ Enjoy our summer before autumn fully comes around ~
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Time seems move so quickly at the end of summer….
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