A quadrille for dVerse: Be not Afraid:
Hush my dear
hear this tale:
Nuclear bombs
will end night terror,
Earth will flash the sky—
a spectacular splash
like firework flowers
on a national holiday—
and a mushroom cloud
will trail the Milky Way
gathering stardust,
then fear will be
no more.
~
©2017 Ontheland
That is one macabre lullaby, indeed.
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A twisted mood 🙂
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Oh, my. Strong stuff here, well done.
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Thank you 🙂
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You’ve verbalised my biggest fear, Janice, while including beauty in the lines:.
‘a spectacular splash
like firework flowers’
and
‘…a mushroom cloud
will trail the Milky Way
gathering stardust’,
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Blimey, dark!
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O it’s heavy ! I think we should post this to every wall ! I am reblogging !
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Reblogged this on milan rajkumar and commented:
I want to post this lullaby on every wall !
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Reblogged , shared on fb , twitted .
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I’m so glad the poem touched a chord.
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I hope it touches many chords !
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Your poem makes me appreciate fear. I suspect fear is better than nothing at all although some might argue with that.
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Thanks for the reflection Frank. Fear with regard to nuclear arsenals at least would indicate a recognition of the potential consequences…perhaps missing in some quarters.
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Perfect title for this, Janice, and I love the counterintuitive structure of a lullaby for such a harsh and, as you say, dark poem. So good.
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Thank you Victoria.
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Reblogged this on Mick E Talbot Poems and commented:
a lullaby
I fear we will hear but once
no chance to say bye
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youv’e ventured
down a path
where no one
wants to tread
an echo of my
sentiments
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Who said you couldn’t see stars at night in the city. Of course you couldn’t see past the fallout for quite a while either. I believe satellite reception would also be affected. Just kidding, that’s lots scarier than the bough breaking, and down will come baby, cradle and all, lol
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That (rock a bye baby) was at the back of my mind when I wrote this 🙂
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😆
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Children’s rhymes are so violent, no wonder they get colic
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No wonder! 😉
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yep, that might be it. awesome!
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Oh, armageddon!
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I am old enough to remember when people thought this might happen. It did not. Such is fear so often. And a reminder fear adds nothing but fear.
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I don’t feel we need to fear fear if we can look it in the eyes … we don’t need to deny the existence of danger even if the best thing we can do is stay calm and be kind to ourselves and others.
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I hate it when my replies send before I am finished 🙂
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Gives me a hopeless kind of feeling tempered with delicious chills, awesome poem!
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Thank you 🙂
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Macabre and lullaby. Well done, Janice.
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Thank you 🙂
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“and a mushroom cloud
will trail the Milky Way
gathering stardust,”
Ironically beautiful words to describe the end of humanity. Let us pray we never have this type of stardust again.
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For sure 🙂
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Beautiful- I love the image of the mushroom cloud joining into the milky way, but are you trying to give me a heart attack? This was petrifying!
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I think I sort of freaked myself out too it’s not a pleasant image unless you focus on its irony (widespread support for such a toxic and destructive technology) Anyway another way to spiral out is to go the direction of some of the movies out there that depict life on the planet for survivors of a nuclear explosion.
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Those also scare the crap out of me. Too possible!
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Dark lullaby indeed. Makes a point loud n clear.
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A masterful write, sure to make us all feel a frisson of fear!
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Thank you Bev
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Wow! Well… North Korea or Planet X. Choose your poison. Scary stuff!
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Beautiful! Dark! Twisted and so Emotional! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Mushroom cloud reaching the milky way, what what beautiful and fearsome day would that be!
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