thunder moon

Shadows mist my path

under moon-pierced thunder clouds

my headlights are faint

on this dark forsaken road

where ruts rise up to meet me.


©2017 Ontheland 

Linked to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai: “Writing and enjoying haiku #2 no rules” in honour of Basho’s words:

Now you know the rules forget them immediately and write from the heart.

12 thoughts on “thunder moon

  1. Brilliant! I burst out laughing at the last line. Life can be very bumpy sometimes. The last couple of weeks felt like a particularly tricky bit of road to me.

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