Pondering classical haiku, can tangle my mind
When first-day-of-spring lifts my hair, haiku may leap from my pen
Waiting for, a haiku moment, perhaps this, is it.
©2017 Ontheland
Ever since I started writing haiku, I have engaged internally with an interest in classical haiku and a desire for creative leeway. It is not really a problem—just a process that happens. These reflections experiment with the Sijo poetry form — for the classical guidelines, please follow the link.
This made me laugh.
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Glad to hear it 🙂
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Such Poetic Awesomeness. 😎🌹
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Thank you Dorna…I had a ‘moment’ 🙂
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And such a Spectacular moment it was, is. 🙂
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love this transition from the tangled mind to the wind lifting your hair–a clearing out that allows the words to leap 🙂
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Thank you Jennifer :))
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Your haiku work well Janice in all forms.
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Thanks Denis. I was having a ‘moment’ 🙂
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