My paws are bent leaning on
warm leg, there on my day couch
soft darkness slouches round my
limbs no cat meow dare rouse
my slumber breath upon a
forest stump sprayed with fresh perfume.
©2017 Ontheland
I recently read Fifteen Dogs by André Alexis, an amazing Canadian novel about dogs who have been bestowed human intelligence (as well as their own). One of these dogs recites poems that inspired me to write this one. As the author explains in an end note, the genre was invented by François Caradec for Oulipo, a group of writers creating meaning using constrained writing techniques.
This type of poem has meaning for both humans and animals and when read aloud, includes an auditory version of an animal’s name. The dog featured in my photo and poem is ‘Bentley’. When you read the poem out loud you will hear his name.
In the novel, fifteen such poems include a hidden dog’s name. Here is one for example:
The light that moves is not the light.
The light that stays is not the light.
The true light rose countless sleeps ago.
It rose, even in the mouth of birds.
from Fifteen Dogs, by André Alexis, p.34
∗Rosie is the name discovered when you read the poem out loud.
Beautiful poem, image and story Janice. A sleeping dog, what a beauty.
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Thanks Denis. I would have liked to have taken a closer shot for better focus, but I didn’t want to wake him.
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I love the way you have trained him to answer the phone if it rings Janice.
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Yes, but as you see he’s sleeping on the job 😉
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Janice, lovely poem and the photo is all serenity and peace! Interesting about the Fifteen Dogs poem – fun and clever at the same time.
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Thank you Annika. The book is excellent…about human existence, dog culture, relationships between humans and dogs, language and so on. The book and author have won prestigious prizes. I chose to read it as one on the short list for an event on our public radio (CBC) called Canada Reads.
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Awesome! 😎
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Like it both , your poem and the one from the book, Sounds an interesting Book , Is it only poems or a fiction ?
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It’s a very unique book…a story with an incredible premise…Hermes and Apollo decide to do an experiment by giving 15 dogs human intelligence…a fascinating tale…one of the dogs creates poems and they are sprinkled throughout the book.
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Beautiful poems. I love the idea of a hidden name within the poems. What a lovely idea. The book you mention reads unique, quirky and fascinating. Thank you. 😀 xx
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Thank you Vashti. All those adjectives apply. The book is about humans as much as animals but I suspect it would be most interesting to those who know a dog or two and wondered about how they think and act.
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😀 ❤ xx
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