Golden fire sword
shimmers in west horizon
calling seekers home.
©2017 Ontheland
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A setting sun reminded me of the sword Paul Coelho pursues on his pilgrimage.
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Such stunning beauty!
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An interesting response to the challenge Janice.
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I don’t usually see swords in the sky but I guess you see what’s on your mind:)
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It is a shame that the new WordPress ‘Reader’ crops the last line of you poem. WordPress insist that the changed would be great for the written blog…..not sure it is. I say a shame as it is a great 3 liner 🙂
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Thanks David. WordPress has several formats for the Reader depending on your device but I think I ‘ve seen the one your referring to. It only provides an excerpt and you have to click to load the site…depending on the excerpt you can be deceived into thinking you have read the whole thing. It’s happened to me and I’ve fortunately clicked (by chance) and discovered much more. I find this format quite annoying….it doesn’t even show the number of words in the post which tells you if there is more to read. Now I’ve vented perhaps I ‘ll give them the feedback 🙂
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I and many others have but they don’t seem to listen
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Oh well…let’s hope the feedback is in a to do file somewhere.
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