Blowing rain
smothers blazing fire,
Hot coals glow
promise of fresh flame
to light a new path.
©2017 Ontheland
This month’s theme at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is The Pilgrimage by Paul Coelho. I’ll be reading the book and Chèvrefeuille’s inspiring posts, and writing haiku and tanka along the way. This first tanka is in response to Carpe Diem #1113: the Pilgrimage starts—the prologue.
Great poem Janice.
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Thank you 🙂
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Such phenomenal beauty!
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Extraordinary response Janice. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for your guidance through The Pilgrimage. I am enjoying the process.
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