Incoherent scrawls
never to be read
(by an other)
only inscribed
hidden and shredded.
How many pages
were scarred
by young desperation
scratching wildly
as sliding innocence
shattered?
Excavation
for elusive meaning,
for self buried deep,
wading through salty waters
to find ephemeral light.
©2016 ontheland
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In response to dVerse Quadrille #22: Scars
OH! I LOVE this:
“scratching wildly
as sliding innocence
shattered”
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Thank you 🙂
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I still write many notes myself that I don’t get time to re-read. I tear off the pages and eventually they pile on my desk until I get tired of looking at them. Eventually I pick them up for the recycling bin, but having written them once may have been their value.
I enjoyed your quadrille.
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Yes I think the writing at least has value. I certainly know what it’s like getting tired of looking at scribbles and finally recycling (ripping can feel good 🙂
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Journal writing can be filled with many moments of immersion into ‘salty waters’ trying to flow towards ‘ephemeral light.’ It can also be very therapeutic towards healing the scars that scream for attention. Nicely written, Janice. ❤
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Thank you Olga 🙂
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Superb!
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Thank you 🙂
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Wonderful, Janice! Reminds me of all my scrawling in my many diaries and notebooks over the years, particularly when younger when emotions ran so wild. Now all safely stored away…still pondering what to do with them all.
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This is absolutely riveting!!❤️
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Thank you… I ‘m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Oh I can so relate to this. I especially love the last two lines.
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Thank you…I’m glad the words connect.
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Just write and write, even for yourself alone. Someday it may find light when you are ready to share them.
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scribbling is fun 😉
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Yes it can be Mr. Scribbles :))
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