Sparrows, pigeons, gulls,
a panoply of feathers,
excitement on high.
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Sparrows, pigeons, gulls,
bird-line on hydro wire,
suspense fills the air.
©2016 ontheland
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In response to Carpe Diem Special #221, Candy’s Showcase, “promise in red clouds”. My haiku is inspired by Candy’s ‘flock of black birds’ haiku, one of four beautiful poems featured in this Carpe Diem episode.
I especially love the second one. What an image.
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Thank you 🙂 The second one most closely reflects what I saw the other day. I am always intrigued by large gatherings of birds…the presence of different types of birds together was something I hadn’t noticed before.
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Phenomenal as always! 🌹
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Thank you 😊
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