Sky screens

South window greeting—

grey venetian clouds  open,

golden sun shines through.

Delicate branches

brush autumn sky, slender trunks

sketch vertical lines.

©2016, ontheland

21 thoughts on “Sky screens

      1. Yes that’s exactly what I had in mind. I hadn’t noticed that I had went horizontal in the first haiku and then vertical in the next—two recent and separate scenes with a hidden connection 🙂

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  1. Your poem reminded me of a story called “Castle neither in the sky nor on earth”, I imagined, while reading, there is someone up there opening a window, to let a little bit of us come into his/her home.

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