On nights you’re not here
blues music casts warm shadows,
blue ink freely flows—
I’m whole knowing you’ll return,
all alone but not lonely.
©2016 ontheland
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I’ve been following the Tanka Splendor series over at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. This poem was inspired by Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #22–although my tanka may not quite fit the classical form, it touches on a classical theme (love) and uses the prompt (blues). I was enticed to write by this beautiful example that Chèvrefeuille (author of Carpe Diem) offered as an example. It is written by Fujiwara Motozane (ca 950).
a river of tears
floats my body off
on its current
but it cannot quell the fire
you have set in my heart∼Fujiwara Motozane
Lovely. :o)
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Thank you 🙂
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Love this Janice. 🙂
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Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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