Waiting for rain
teasing sun appears-retreats
shadow play unveiled
transparent wisps slowly rise
dark drama brews beyond.
©2016 Ontheland
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For Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #3: Rain—Although I don’t adhere to a classic tanka approach, I am most grateful for the instruction, examples and inspiration provided in this November Tanka event hosted by Chèvrefeuille.
Sounds like a good poem depicting Florida. :o)
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A very good poem!
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Thank you 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Oh! Wow! Such natural drama. 🌹
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Beautiful photo. Wonderful clouds and shadows.
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Thank you 🙂
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